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her.alter.ego

her.alter.ego


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Number of posts : 25
Age : 34
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Registration date : 2009-01-14

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PostSubject: Listen . In . Complete . Silence   Listen . In . Complete . Silence EmptyThu Jan 29, 2009 4:03 am

Listen. In. Complete. Silence.


I can yell my point,
Until the entire city hears me.
Yet its a heavy weight fight.
What I say vs. What you think.

I say I love you.
That I still care.
All I need is a little time.
I'll always be there.

You say I dont love you.
That Im just lying and will never be there.
I so called never cared.
You just disregard everything that I've ever said.

If it was something negative
Said out of anger while I was upset.
Then obviously its true ; to you.
Throw it in my face after that.

If it was positive
Loving and from the heart.
Then to you I must be lying.
Feelings never there from the start.

Now that you've lost me,
Heres a little future advice.
When she speaks,
Dont talk.
Dont ignore her feelings.

Listen.
In.
Complete.
Silence.
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miladani


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Number of posts : 36
Age : 33
Humor : goofy
Registration date : 2009-01-13

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PostSubject: Re: Listen . In . Complete . Silence   Listen . In . Complete . Silence EmptyThu Jan 29, 2009 6:39 am

I totally love this!

What i love is the realness of it cuz I can totally relate to this!
I love that its not the typical poem where everything rhymes and just has a bunch of cliche phrases and all that
I really really can relate to this and i'm sure many other girls with stubborn ass head boyfriends or exes can totally get where this is coming from

GOOD JOB!
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her.alter.ego

her.alter.ego


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Number of posts : 25
Age : 34
Humor : i love to laugh
Registration date : 2009-01-14

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PostSubject: Re: Listen . In . Complete . Silence   Listen . In . Complete . Silence EmptyThu Jan 29, 2009 6:54 am

Thank you Very Happy
my ex [ who is almost my bestfriend now lol ]
was my inspiration .
im glad you could relate .
now i dont feel alone lol
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Number of posts : 36
Age : 33
Humor : goofy
Registration date : 2009-01-13

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PostSubject: Re: Listen . In . Complete . Silence   Listen . In . Complete . Silence EmptyThu Jan 29, 2009 6:57 am

lol am sure ther are tons of girls like us lo
not all guys are the same in every way but they do come from the same species lol
stubbornness just happens to be the trait that stands out
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