( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed *

Subject: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Fri Feb 06, 2009 9:19 am

Chapter 1

" First Impressions "

( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Derion

He spread her legs wide, putting them over his shoulders. The heat from his breath making her love grow hotter. He reached his right hand up, caressing her left breast as he began to feast on her moist Thanksgiving Day dessert. Never missing a beat his left hand went up for her other breast. Fondling both he went for the kill, devouring her red velvet cake greedily. Erotic moans escapes her lips as a result of his hunger.

Pulling the sheets and gripping the back of his head she felt a powerful orgasmic feeling run through her spine. With her back began to arch she felt it coming. Her breathing became heavy as she came intensely dripping her love on his tongue. He licked her clitoris softly. Sucking it slowly, making her love run even more. She didn’t believe his ad yesterday but after the previous events of that night, he changed her mind. Keeping his promise they way she felt was beyond satisfactory and he guaranteed that.

Waking up with the sun beaming through his hotel window, Derion King could feel someone rubbing the small of his back. He turned around to face a woman who he had a previous rendezvous with. "Hey Baby," She said as she spoke to Derion in a soft, innocent voice. To him, she was the true meaning of beauty. Her skin was a silky smooth caramel color and her body was beyond a definition. He looked down into her dark brown almond shaped eyes giving her a warm smile. "I really enjoyed last night." She continued as she got out the bed and walked to the bathroom.

She was bare naked and the way her body moved made him begin to get erect all over again. He started thinking about something else before they ended up having a round two of last night, free of charge. She came out the bathroom shortly, completely dressed. No further words were exchanged as she placed her two carat solitaire round cut diamond wedding ring on and laid a wad of money on the nightstand beside him. Grabbing her keys and purse, she gave him one last look before heading out the hotel room.

Glancing over at the alarm clock positioned on the nightstand it read 11:30 am. Realizing he only had thirty minutes till check out and only an hour to make it to Los Angeles in time for his plane, Derion grabbed his things and bombarded the bathroom. Leaving the hotel room he flipped open his cell phone to place a call.

"I'm on my way to the airport now... Yeah, the business meeting was good. I closed the deal... Aiight I’ll see you soon... I love you too,"

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this story is " revamped " so it may sound familiar to whoever read it before . reviews are appreciated as well as constructive critisim [ im not mean , i take everything into consideration ] && im definately going to finish this story because its my baby - blush - so sit back && relax Smile

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Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Sat Feb 07, 2009 2:21 am

woah!

that was good!!

I smell an a affair!

this is good! very descriptive i like that. my imagination doesn't have to work that hard and i totally enjoyed this!

BUMPERS!

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Sat Feb 07, 2009 7:08 am

Chapter 1

" First Impressions "

continued . . .

"Can I help you?" The waitress asked Juliet Rich as she entered Justin’s Restaurant located in the heart of Buckhead.

"No thank you," Juliet replied as she locked eyes with a man seated at the bar. Slowly making her way over to him she adjusted the black split sleeve dress she was wearing that hugged her 5 foot 6 inch frame. "Hey Jay, how you doin?"

"Great now that I get to see your beautiful face again," He remarked charmingly as they embraced in a hug.

"You say that all the time, Jay. You don't have to keep sweet talkin' me," Juliet laughed before she smiled at him revealing a perfect set of pearly whites that complimented her hazel eyes.

"It's the truth, ma," Jay said as he escorted her over to a table. "Have a seat," Juliet couldn’t help but to notice his body when he went to take a seat. Jay was 6 feet even but had the body of a football player and the chocolate brown skin to match.

Before Juliet could comment his physique , a waitress approached their table, "Good Evening, I'm Tameka and I’ll be your waitress tonight. Can I start you off with something to drink?"

"I'll have the P.Diddy," Jay ordered as he looked at the menu, "And she'll have The Girlfriend."

"I'm sorry, can you change my drink to an Apple Martini," Juliet countered his order, looking back at the waitress with a fake smile. She was a very head strong person and hated when someone tried to do things for her, even something so simple as to order her drink. Juliet had been like that since she could remember and wasn't about to change now. No matter how sexy she thought Jay was.

Jay waited for the waitress to leave before he spoke, "Did you have to do that?"

"Do what?" She asked with a blank expression before returning to the menu to see what she would order for dinner.

"Correctin me in front of the waitress. Got me up here lookin' stupid." Jay replied with a hint of anger after the waitress placed their drinks on the table.

Juliet cocked her freshly arched eyebrow at Jay, "Nobody told you to order for me. You took that matter into yo own hands therefore causing you to make ya' self look stupid. Plus I don't even drink Remy Red," She stated referring to one of the contents in the martini they called, The Girlfriend.

Jay didn't like Juliet's comment but ignored it, seeing as though it made her even sexier to him. There was nothing more attractive than a woman that spoke her mind. He couldn't help but to smile at her.

"What?" She quizzed after taking a sip of her Apple Martini. After noticing his smile she softened up the hard exterior his atitude forced her to put up, causing her to smile back at him.

"You look so sexy right now, ma. How about we order our food to-go and head back to my place?" Jay asked as a grin crept on his face.

The way Jay looked at her after his last comment made Juliet tingle inside. His light brown eyes starring back at her moistened Juliet between the legs causing her to get a bit weak. She couldn't say no to him, not until she experienced some fierce head game from him.

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kinda slow , i know just be patient .
im not posting complete chapters because they are
SUPER long but i will update frequently because of that .
also, if the color is too bright , let me know Smile

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Sun Feb 08, 2009 5:41 am

its all good i purposely made the background of the board black so any colour would look good n bright colours would be toned down lol

I'm loving how we get to see how the relationship progresses it makes me feel more connected to the characters in the piece

Looking forward to the updates! Bumpers

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Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Wed Feb 11, 2009 4:34 am

Chapter 1

" First Impressions "

continued . . .

Later that night Derion drove down 285 heading to his two bedroom apartment in East Atlanta listening to Ron Browz Jumping Out The Window. No longer in the mood for rap he began searching for something to listen to on the radio. Finding commercials on both V-103 and Hot 107.9, Derion headed to his last resort. He reached to the passenger side visor and looked through CD's his girlfriend left in his car. He slid in her copy of Trey Songz The Ladies Choice Part 3. Listening to his version of the latest new hits one song began to capture his attention, Murder She Wrote.

"This shit hot," Derion spoke to his self turning the volume up. Listening to the song word for word it started to make him think. Especially once he heard the chorus.

And it was like click clack bang bang , I got shot. Never should've got caught slippin' with this girl. When the pretty girls shoot they gon' aim for your heart. Murder she wrote.

He knew what he was doing wasn't right, nor fair to his girlfriend of 2 years but didn't exactly know how to go about stopping. Derion had created a career out of what he knew how to do best, please a woman physically, and loved the feeling it gave him. But Derion also realized that if his girlfriend ever found out it would be another case of Murder She Wrote. Unlike the song, he was going to make sure he didn't get caught before he could get out.

Brushing it off for now he continued his drive home. He entered his apartment throwing his mail onto the kitchen countertop. Making sure everything was the way he left it he ended up in his bedroom, where he then put his luggage up and took a shower. Walking out of the bathroom in a towel he ran right into her.

Derion jumped at the sight of his girlfriend, "Damn baby, you scared me."

"I wouldn't have scared you if you would've answered yo phone or checked ya' voicemail," Shanel McCoy replied making her way into his spare bedroom, with traces of attitude in her southern accented voice.

"I never turned my phone on after we landed." Derion followed her into the room gently grabbing her from behind, "You spending the night?"

Shanel removed his arms from her waist, as she made her way over to the closet door. "Yeah," she finally replied closing the closet door after placing her black Paris Biarritz Chanel Duffel Bag that Derion bought her last Christmas inside. She exited the spare bedroom, entering his master bedroom getting un-dressed.

Derion made his way into the same room where he stood there, still in his towel as he watched her remove every article of clothing from her 5 foot 8, thick brown sugar complected frame. Shanel turned her head to him, noticing his towel lift a little and smiled.

She slowly walked up to him, wrapping her arms around his neck, "I'm sorry for getting mad at you. I just missed you so much baby. This weekend seemed to go by slow without you."

"I missed you too, Shanel. I thought about you the entire time," Derion responded honestly placing his arms around her hips.

It was actually the truth. Though he slept with other women it was all business to him. Each time he had to fantasize that each female was the one he left at home waiting for him.

Shanel placed her head on his shoulder, "I hate it that you have to go out of town so much. I barely get to see you anymore bay. I get lonely without you here with me."

Derion brushed a strand of her jet black hair out of her face, "I just need a little time to get stuff straight at work and everything will get better baby, I promise."

Shanel led Derion to his king size bed where they laid naked side by side. "Tell me how much you love me," Derion said as he held Shanel in his arms thinking of a way to get out of the double life he created.

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( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Juliet

Jay laid Juliet across his California king sized bed. Her tongue traced her full lips seductively inviting him to explore her body. Sitting up Juliet unhooked her bra, exposing her perky twins. Jay wasted no time lifting her up, sliding her boy shorts off. Placing his hands between Juliet’s thighs, he opened them, exploring her vagina with his eyes.

A soft moan escaped her when Jay parted the other set of pink lips, located between Juliet's thighs, caressing her clit. She threw her head back, closing her eyes and biting down on her lip, enjoying what Jay was doing to her. He slid two fingers inside causing her back to arch, moaning a little louder. Jay pulled his fingers out, licking Juliet's love from them. Ready to experience more of him, she sat up, instructing Jay to remove his clothing. A frown crept on her face when her eyes located his erect manhood.

"What's wrong ma?" Jay asked noticing her facial expression.

"The fuck is that?" Juliet questioned while her eyes stayed locked below his waist.

"What you mean, what's that? It's my dick, girl."

"Where's the rest of it?" Juliet bluntly asked, scrunching up her face, observing his penis once more. It was 4.5 inches and curved off to the right.

"Bitch! Get the fuck out my house!" Jay roared pulling up his boxers, more out of embarrassment than anger. Juliet was the sexiest woman he had brought back to his house and hoped she would have ignored what he lacked between his legs.

Juliet couldn't help but laugh in his face. Their entire ride from Justin's to Jay's apartment he kept telling her all the things he was going to do to her. She continued laughing while she re-dressed and exited his home.

"Wait till I tell Ari about this shit." Juliet said laughing to her self, pulling out her cell phone, calling herself a cab.

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[i gave ya'll two updates in one
next update will be the start of chapter 2 [ finally ] ;
introducing Arianna && Shawna
enjoy Very Happy

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Wed Feb 11, 2009 5:43 am

Oh snap lmao homeboy got 4 n a half inches?!?!?! WTF lmao that shit was maaaaaad funny lmao

nigga got a wifey but he creepin...aint feelin that at all guess its all in the job but still thats messed up.

They been goin together for 2 years!! time to give that shit up!

i'm loving this keep bumpin mama!

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Fri Feb 13, 2009 7:45 am

Chapter 2
Something New && Something Old

( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Juliet

"Shut up! He had a baby dick?!" Ariiahna Henderson exclaimed from the driver side of her 2008 Cadillac CTS. She had just picked up her bestfriend and co-worker, Juliet and was already on the verge of tears from laughing so hard.

"Yes girl! On the way to his crib that nigga was like, 'Damn girl you so fine! I'ma wear that ass out! I'ma break ya back! ' ," Juliet spoke in her best Jay impression. "And all kinds of mess. Then he had the nerve to kick me out like I was wrong."

"I am so sorry I hooked you up with him, Jewels." said Ariiahna brushing her curly golden hair out of her face revealing the smile plasetered on her caramel colored skin. Jay was her boyfriend's friend who kept asking her about Juliet every time she ran into him. Tired of hearing Juliet complain about no-good-ass-nigga's and Jay nagging her about her friend, she finally gave in and connected the two 4 months ago. Though she didn't get the results she wanted out of it, she did get a good laugh.

"Don't even worry about it, Ari. I had fun and learned not to be trying to find a man through you," she replied, laughing to mask the hurt she started to feel inside. Every thing was perfect until the person she believed she would make her Mrs. King left her to go to college out of state 5 years ago. Now Juliet started to wonder why things went south when it came to love and relationships with her. How could it be so hard to find that one for her?

Juliet began to look out the passenger side window, hoping Ariiahna wouldn't catch the few tears that managed to leak before she could wipe them away. Knowing how Juliet was the type of person to express her feelings until she was ready, Arianna let it go, for now.

Trying to make the ride to work a little less awkward, she inserted her Avant's Self-titled CD playing their favorite song, Break Ya Back. The ironic lyrics of the song caused them to laugh, putting a smile on Juliets face. "You a damn trip, Ari."

"You wouldn't believe what happened!" Ullanda, a fellow co-worker said to them as they entered the McKinley-Kensington Law Firm. Her short 5 foot 2 build stopped them in their tracks, causing them to look down to her at an angle but didn't take away from how much they respected her. Ullanda was the one that helped them get the job there and always fixed their mistakes. She had their back no matter what.

"What?" Ariiahna asked being the nosey one out the two.

"Mr. Kensington quit!"

"Are you serious?" Juliet exclaimed. Mr. Kensington was one of the two partners at the law firm and was more like a second father to them. It didnt make any sense to why he would just up and quit.

"Yes! It was rumors going around that a few girls where going to file sexual harrasment charges against him. I guess he decided to quit before anything could happen." Ullanda answered dropping her head. She refused to believe that the man she called " Pops " would do such a thing.

"Thats crazy, its just Mr. McKinley now?" Ariiahna asked sad about the recents events that took place.

"Nope. They hired some bougie bitch. Walking around like she own the shit." Ullanda spoke with disgust. She glanced at the clock on the wall to her right, "A matter of fact, she having a meeting in 5 minutes that we're sposed to be at. You get to the see the broad for ya self"

Ariiahna, Juliet and Ullanda sat around the largely packed conference room as they watched a woman stroll through the doors wearing a silk black Baby Phat Chain Trimmed Cowl Front Dress with matching gold pumps. Ariiahna sucked her teeth, "I got that same dress."

"Good morning ladies and gentlemen, I'm Shawna Johnson. I'm sure you are all aware of the sudden changes that are taking place around here. For those who are a bit slower than others, Mr.Kensington has resigned as partner." Shawna paused, giving those who didn't know some time to let it sink in. She too had heard about the impact he made on others lives at the firm and how close he was to everyone. But what was done is now done, it's her turn now.

A smile slid onto her face as she concluded, "I'm going to be replacing him. I look forward to working with each and everyone of you. And please don't call me Mrs. Johnson, that's my mother in-law. Just call me Shawna." She exited the room leaving everyone to their whispers and murmurs.

Ullanda was the first to speak. "It's something shady about her. I swear I seen her ass before."

"She do look a little familiar." Juliet agreed.

Ariiahna shook her head, "I don't care about her. As long as I get my check at the end of the week, I'm good."

Juliet replied checking her Gucci 1500 Series watch, "I feel you. That last check bought this. But I'ma get up with ya'll for lunch, I got some stuff to finish." She ended as they parted ways.

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i know . still kinda slow . it gets better . gotta introduce all the characters first .
i seen some comments about Jay && his lil man. lol if only ya'll really new .
that was based on a true story lol just a different name .
Kassandra will be introduced next .

Number of posts : 9 Registration date : 2009-01-17

I'm loving this story you have real serious talent.
I used to write like that but i haven't in a while so i hope i haven't lost it...lol

great job keep it up/

Bumpers

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Fri Feb 13, 2009 10:58 pm

keep updatin i like this!
Ari is a trip! i love her!!!

BUMPERS

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Sun Mar 01, 2009 6:38 am

Chapter 2
Something New && Something Old

continued . . .

Nick Ashby, Derion's close friend's voice echoed through his Blackberry Curve for the fourth time, "Don't forget. I want the Baby Back Ribs with extra sauce."

"I heard you the first three times," Derion chuckled as he entered Outback Steakhouse.

"I'm just making sure you get it through that thick head of yours. You know you always fucking something up," Nick laughed with Derion as he thought back on all the times they used to get in trouble together. "But call me back when you get out of there," he finished their quick conversation.

Derion ended the call, placing his phone inside of his black Rocawear Mystery Jeans and proceeded to order lunch. After 20 minutes of waiting restlessly at the bar for his order, he noticed a small group of women walking in, grabbing the attention of those around them. His eyes scanned the crowd until they locked with one of the women. Smiling, she excused herself from the women she came with.

"Well, well, well. Look what we have here," she stated folding her arms on her chest, smiling from ear to ear.

"How you doing Demetria?" Derion replied a bit annoyed.

Demetria Blair was Shanel's best friend and her own private investigator whether she wanted her to be or not. She felt as though Derion wasn't good enough for Shanel, like many friends felt, but hers went deeper. Demetria made it her personal obligation to prove, "He ain't shit," as she liked to put it so very often.

"I'm good. Having lunch with a few friends."

"I didn't know you had any friends besides Shanel," Derion replied with a smirk.

Her smile vanished, "Funny."

One of the women she came with called her, "Ria! Our table is ready!"

"I got to go but remember, I'm watching you. When you fuck up, I'll be right there," she finshed, making her way back to her friends.

Derion couldn't help but shake his head. Demetria was a mess in more ways than one to him. He thought she was beautiful and was attracted to her physically. Derion had a thing for tall, redbone women, but because of his feelings for Shanel and the hatred Demetria has for him, she was off limits.

Exiting Outback Steakhouse with his carry-out in hand, Derion dropped his car keys, trying to juggle the heavy bag and retrieve them out of his pocket. To his surprise, a woman picked them up before he could attempt to.

"Thank you -," Derion stopped mid-sentence once he made eye contact with the woman. "Juliet?"

"Derion?" Juliet cocked her head to the side, finally recognizing the man before her. An uncomfortable silence fell over the two as they stood there speechless, not knowing what to say next to the other.

"Get the hell out of here! Derion?" Ariiahna exclaimed as she finally caught up to Juliet, embracing Derion into a hug.

"What up Ari?" Derion greeted her, removing his eyes from Juliet for the first time.

"What are you doing here? I thought you were still back in Michigan?" Juliet managed to ask her high school sweetheart.

"I moved back after I graduated from Wayne State," Derion replied looking back at Juliet. He couldn't help but notice how much Juliet had changed since he seen her last. "You looking good girl."

Blushing, Juliet replied, "Thanks. You look good as well."

"He grew into that big ass head he had," Ariiahna spoke, causing the three of them to laugh.

Feeling his phone vibrate in his pocket notifying him of a missed call, he remembered what he was supposed to be doing. "I'm sorry but I gotta' go."

"Why don't we exchange numbers and catch up?" Juliet asked hesitantly.

"I was gonna say the same thing," Derion replied, flashing his perfect set of teeth as Juliet pulled her phone out. "678-555-5566."

"I'll talk to you later," Juliet ended as they parted ways.

Watching them as they made their way inside the building, Derion didn’t notice he had a set of eyes on him as well. Pulling off, he decided to return the missed call. Confusion took over him when he saw it was from an out-of-state number instead of Nick. Calling the number back, a smile appeared on his face after hearing the voice of his latest client.

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i do apologize for the long wait .
but for those still with me , i thank you Smile

i also thank Shon for editing
&& looking over this for me ! big ups to you !
thanks for the comments everyone [ love them ]
&& to those that actually read this part ,
i know before i said Kassandra was coming up
but i changed it , she's coming next .]

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Sun Mar 01, 2009 2:34 pm

Homegirl Ria is a trip! she's like a friend i have *remaining nameless*. i was kinda like her when that nameless friend got with her boyfriend. in the back of y mind i guess i'm still like that...just waitin

But yo Derion n Juliet meet agen! Love it cant wait to see what happens!

Next Client! i kno theis "client" bout to add some new turns to this!

Love this mamas!!!
This shit is poppin!

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Mon Mar 02, 2009 4:08 am

Chapter 3
" Sick && Tired "

( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Juliet

"Have you talked to Derion yet?" Ariiahna yelled kicking her feet up on Juliet's coffee table, dipping her spoon into her Ben & Jerry's ice cream.

"He just gave me his number today! I dont want him thinkin' I'm desperate or anything." Juliet replied returning into her living room with two dresses in hand. Holding them up she asked, "The white one or the red one?"

"But you are!" Ariiahna laughed, "This is yo second date in two days. And it aint like it's the same guy."

"I'm not desperate, trick!" Juliet laughed throwing a couch pillow at Ariiahna. "I'm giving JaVonte a chance before I even think about calling Derion. You know how I was when I was with him. I'm not trying to go down that road again. Not yet."

"But you'd rather go out with nigga after nigga? Who, in the end, aint shit." Ariiahna replied sarcastically, "Understandable."

Juliet rolled her eyes before speaking, "Could you please just pick a dress? JaVonte is on his way."

"Neither," Ariiahna dugg into her ice cream some more. "He saw you dressed up today because of work, so go with a different look. Rock something that's screams you. A cute graphic tee, some skinny jeans and a fresh pair of nikes or Jay's. Show him you got two sides. You can be professional when it comes to work but yet still a bad bitch."

"Even though sometimes I feel you need professional help, you make sense. I'ma go get ready. Keep a look out for him."

Ariiahna yelled behind her, "Aiight but leave the bamboo earrings in yo jewelry case! They cute but don't over do it." She placed a spoonful in her mouth before speaking, "Damn this is some good ass ice cream."

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( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Derion

"You told me everything was gonna get better! I'm sick and tired of this shit, Derion! Stop ignoring me and say something, damn!" Shanel yelled, huffing and puffing, watching Derion pack his luggage for yet another business trip. She had spent the last hour yelling at him about why she didn't want him go. Not wanting to deal with her while she was still angry, Derion ignored her.

"You really want me to say something Shanel?" Derion finally asked zipping up his luggage.

Shanel sat on the bed with her arms folded, "Yes. Explain to me why your going."

"Come with me." Derion spoke, directing her to follow him on to the balcony inside of his bedroom. He pointed down to two cars sitting in carports. "You see those two cars there?"

Shanel nodded recognizing both cars. The matching black 2009 Mercedes Benz SL 55 he got for their 2 year anniversary less than a few months ago.

"I don't leave on these business trips for no reason, Shanel. I got bills to pay. I got 2 expensive ass car notes to pay off. Not to mention the credit cards you like to use on a daily basis. I told you that everything is gonna' get better and it is." He paused waiting for a response from her. After realizing she wouldn't give him one he finished, "I'll see you when I get back."

Derion attempted to kiss Shanel on the lips but she turned her head, kissing her on the cheek instead. She hated how work always came first with him. He bought her everything but it was everything she didn't need nor want from him. What she wanted didn't have a pricetag and it couldn't be bought. No matter how much she expressed to him how she didn't need the material things, Shanel still felt as though Derion didn't get it. He never would to her.

"I won't be here when you get back." She finally spoke up, facing the ground.

Thinking she meant something else, Derion left it at that. As he exited the apartment building he looked up to see Shanel still standing on the balcony where he left her. Entering his car, he placed his luggage inside, then bringing the engine to life. He took one last look at the balcony where Shanel was no longer there.

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:58 am

Chapter 3

continued . . .

Shanel paced back and forth in the living room trapped in her thoughts. She still wasn't sure if she wanted to go through with it or even exactly what it was she was going to do. But sitting around waiting on a man was definitely something she wasn't going to do. The doorbell rang releasing her from the thoughts that consumed her. Opening it, her best friend stood there with a look of confusion.

“Why you tell me to come pick you up from this nigga house? ” Demetria asked scrunching her face up, making her way inside of the apartment.

“I need you to help me move my stuff,“ Shanel replied looking at the boxes she had placed in front of the door earlier.

Still confused Demetria asked, “Two boxes? You need me to help you move two boxes?”

Shanel turned her attention back on Demetria, “Not just these. I need you to help me pack up my apartment too.”

"Aiight, but where are you going? Don't tell me you leaving the entire state because of this nigga," She replied placing her hand on her hip.

Shanel laughed before replying,” No I’m gonna' stay with my sister for a little while. Could you get that box over there?"

"Yeah, Shari?" Demetria asked grabbing the assigned box.

"No, my other sister Shawnna. I don't think you met her yet, she just moved back down here. That girl don't stay in one place for too long." Shanel replied taking her house and car key's off her key ring and placing it on the counter top.

"You ready?" Demetria asked sensing the sadness building in Shanel's voice.

Shanel grabbed the other box from off the counter before dryly replying, "Yeah." Demetria left first leaving her to lock up. Shanel turned out the lights to the apartment, leaving behind the material things he seemed think she wanted.

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i know its short
but i had to give ya'll something
ima try to update everyday that im off .

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Thu Mar 05, 2009 3:32 am

oh shit she leavin him??

i get why though she need her man n he always gone

my ass would b gone too

LOVIN THIS!!

Subject: Re: ( Satisfaction ) Guaranteed * Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:33 pm

this is fire for real...i wanna get to posting something too but it's like i don't have the time

since i'm here tho....

Ariiahna LMAO das my girl right there Very Happy

keep on updating